I need some help with a book im writing...help??

ok my book is about a girl who is being physically abused, but her friends have been trying to figure out why she was acting strange, they tried confronting her, talking to her, giving her and intervention, but nothing worked, one day the person who is beating her up knocked her out and her friends came into her house looking for her and found her on the floor passed out... then her friends sent her to the hospital.





(this isnt a good summary, but im not the best at writing summaries.:)





what should happen to end the book/??ive been stuck with this for such a long time! help is needed! thank you sooooo much :D








there%26#039;s no sequel just so you know.
I need some help with a book im writing...help??
She dies at the hospital! Always good to end with a death.
I need some help with a book im writing...help??
I would certainly like to see some large amounts of girl bonding to get over this horrid abuse, and I%26#039;d love her friends to intervene in a very hands on way. Then a little revenge would be nice followed by an I will Survive type moment, The End, lol
Reply:Maybe her friends go after the person who was beating her up, and get the arrested/beat them up in revenge? That would be cool.





Good luck with the book, that%26#039;s really cool!
Reply:I think she should go to the hospital and have a confessional with her friends. Talk about her emotions to give the reader insight about what she was going through (if you haven%26#039;t been already, of course! :] ) to emphasize the point of the book. Have the friends report him to the police because their friend is too afraid to do so or too in love with him....something like that! Then have the guy come to get her and have her kill him.





I always like endings like that! haha


I want to get a copy once this is published by the way! :D Let me know so I can go buy it!
Reply:have the victim grl call th police on him and wen hes in jail have her go talk to him and say something about how strang she is and how week he is
Reply:Um from what I here there are only four endings for a story here they are:





gets what they want are happy





get what they want are unhappy





don%26#039;t get want they want are happy





don%26#039;t get what they want are unhappy





also, what your trying to teach people about effects the ending. I would have a %26#039;get what they want unhappy%26#039;, because it takes years for abuse survivors to heal. I hope I%26#039;v been a help.